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2008-08-11 07:28 pm (UTC)
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Ooh, chilling. Poor Obi-Wan. He'll look back on this moment and wonder why he didn't know what was coming.
A couple of nitpicks:
>>Obi-Wan could sometimes be an anathema to Qui-Gon<<
Do you mean enigma? Because anathema is something that is cursed, detested, loathed, or damned.
Also, Tatooine is misspelled throughout.
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A couple of nitpicks:
>>Obi-Wan could sometimes be an anathema to Qui-Gon<<
Do you mean enigma? Because anathema is something that is cursed, detested, loathed, or damned.
Also, Tatooine is misspelled throughout.