Good story! I've always been curious about Owen and Beru, about how much they knew about Luke's parents and what had happened to them.

Owen's always come across as gruff but I think Luke probably needed that as he did in your story, something to keep him on the right path. And he's so quick-tempered too but not in the same way Anakin was.

But it's driving me crazy that you didn't say what the boys were saying to Luke that upset him!