Oh, man. You sucked me into this story right from the start. This is great as a standalone, but it would also be really, really compelling as the first part to a larger piece. The tension really amps up nicely once Vader comes face to face with Mara, but all of the stuff between father and son beforehand is really well done, too.
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Date: 2008-07-16 10:33 pm (UTC)Nice job!