Amazing AU, it was so well done! You should really continue this because it's such an intriguing beginning. I like how you included the dynamics within the Empire with Piett and Mara. Great description of Luke's physical pain - that kind of awful nauseous feeling when you're really messed up. And the growing anxiety with Vader, that feeling that he's on uncertain footing or on thin ice.
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Date: 2008-07-17 03:52 pm (UTC)